Wednesday, July 3, 2024

July 3: "Monday," Mock Orange Tree, Metonymy

Billy Collins window shops . . . 

Monday

by: Billy Collins

The birds are in their trees,
the toast is in the toaster,
and the poets are at their windows.

They are at their windows
in every section of the tangerine of earth--
the Chinese poets looking up at the moon,
the American poets gazing out
at the pink and blue ribbons of sunrise.

The clerks are at their desks,
the miners are down in their mines,
and the poets are looking out their windows
maybe with a cigarette, a cup of tea,
and maybe a flannel shirt or bathrobe is involved.

The proofreaders are playing the ping-pong
game of proofreading,
glancing back and forth from page to page,
the chefs are dicing celery and potatoes,
and the poets are at their windows
because it is their job for which
they are paid nothing every Friday afternoon.

Which window it hardly seems to matter
though many have a favorite,
for there is always something to see--
a bird grasping a thin branch,
the headlights of a taxi rounding a corner,
those two boys in wool caps angling across the street.

The fishermen bob in their boats,
the linemen climb their round poles,
the barbers wait by their mirrors and chairs,
and the poets continue to stare
at the cracked birdbath or a limb knocked down by the wind.

By now, it should go without saying
that what the oven is to the baker
and the berry-stained blouse to the dry cleaner,
so the window is to the poet.

Just think--
before the invention of the window,
the poets would have had to put on a jacket
and a winter hat to go outside
or remain indoors with only a wall to stare at.

And when I say a wall,
I do not mean a wall with striped wallpaper
and a sketch of a cow in a frame.

I mean a cold wall of fieldstones,
the wall of the medieval sonnet,
the original woman's heart of stone,
the stone caught in the throat of her poet-lover.



As a poet, I've done my fair share of window-gazing.  It goes with the territory--observing, noting, interpreting, capturing with words the ineffable world.  

Right now, I'm sitting on my living room couch, typing this post.  Behind me, a large picture window that provides a view of the bushes and tries along the side of my house.  On early mornings in summer, all manners of birds sit in the branches and beat my alarm clock in waking me up with their singing.

However, this morning, I didn't need a window.  One of my best poet friends invited me to sit in her garden and write with her.  So, a little after sunrise, there I was, scribbling away in my journal under the white petals of a mock orange tree.  It felt kind of sacred to me, surrounded by flowers, listening to the world wake up.  Dogs barking.  A jogger slapping by on the sidewalk.  Cars gliding down the street, on their way to jobs or schools or beaches.

My friend and I talked about how poets interact with the world differently than other people.  While everyone else focuses on the forest, we focus on the holes in the maple leaves.  Others concentrate on the rainstorm--we concentrate on the steak sizzle of the rain hitting the sidewalk.  It's a matter of metonymy, letting a part represent the whole.  Poets are great at it.

When my day starts with a little metonymy, I always feel more relaxed and centered.  If it occurs in a flower garden, even better.  And if it involves one of my best friends, it's nirvana.

Saint Marty is still a little blissed out.

Tuesday, July 2, 2024

July 2: "You, Reader," Conversation, Exhilarating and Terrifying

No more short poems from Billy Collins, as I finished that collection (Musical Tables) with yesterday's post. So, the poems from this point forward will be coming from The Trouble with Poetry and Other Poems, starting with . . .

You, Reader

by: Billy Collins

I wonder how you are going to feel
when you find out
that I wrote this instead of you,

that it was I who got up early
to sit in the kitchen
and mention with a pen

the rain-soaked window,
the ivy wallpaper,
and the goldfish circling in its bowl.

Go ahead and turn aside,
bite your lip and tear out the page,
but, listen--it was just a matter of time

before one of us happened 
to notice the unlit candles
and the clock humming on the wall.

Plus, nothing happened that morning--
a song on the radio,
a car whistling along the road outside--

and I was only thinking 
about the shakers of salt and pepper
that were standing side by side on a place mat.

I wondered if they had become friends
after all these years
or if they were still strangers to one another

like you and I
who manage to be known and unknown
to each other at the same time--

me at this table with a bowl of pears,
you leaning in a doorway somewhere
near some blue hydrangeas, reading this.



I often wonder about my readers and how they respond to what I've written, like Collins does in this poem.  Writers want to be read.  Period.  The very act of committing words to a page or screen is an exchange.  A conversation, if you will.

The very best writers, for me, are the ones who express an idea that's not only completely original, but also completely recognizable.  Many times, I've read poems that just takes my breath away with their truths.  It's the whole "Damn, I wish I'd written that" syndrome.  

I spent most of today editing a podcast episode and cobbling together another manuscript of poems.  The podcast is done.  The book?  Not so much.  It's in an early, gestational stage.  I'm not really sure what it is yet, which is exhilarating and terrifying at once.

Faithful disciples of this blog know that I don't let go of poems easily.  I revise.  Then, I revise the revision.  And, just for good measure, I revise the revision of the revision.  That's why it has taken me so long to release my second poetry collection.

It's been windy and rainy most of the day.  I'm waiting for the storms to reignite.  Not planning on writing a new poem this evening.  Too tired creatively.  Instead, I'm going to read some Garrison Keillor.  Then, bed.  (Not very exciting, I know.)

Saint Marty promises to be more exciting tomorrow.



Monday, July 1, 2024

July 1: "Weekday," Busy Work, "Creation"

Billy Collins contemplates wonder . . .

Weekday

by: Billy Collins

Pure sunlight
on the miniature orange tree
and the white columns of the porch.

How extraordinary it would be
some morning on earth
to be dipped into creation.



Billy Collins is talking about simple wonder in this poem.  Yes, wonder CAN be simple--a miniature orange tree dipped in sunlight.  And it is always free to everyone, from poets to garbage collectors.

I spent most of today inside my office at the library, staring at a computer monitor.  A busy-work day that didn't require much in the way of creativity or thought.  Just pointing, clicking, copying, pasting.  Essential stuff, but, ultimately, uninteresting.

I climbed the steps to my office around 7:30 this morning and didn't go outside again until a little after 5 p.m.  During summer, if I'm working, I try not to go outdoors during the day much because I know how difficult it will be to return to my desk.

Of course the day was beautiful and warm.  Almost 80 degrees.  I stood on the roof of the library, watching a sailboat glide past the breakwater, Lake Superior a deep, almost unnatural blue.  As if it was painted by Monet who was trying to capture its blue essence.

At home now, I'm tired bordering on exhausted.  My wife is asleep, and my son is in his room swearing like General Patton at his online gaming friends.

Perhaps, tomorrow morning, Saint Marty will feel dipped in creation.  Or at least dipped in caffeine.

Creation

by: Martin Achatz

It took God six days to create
the universe like some cosmic
paint-by-numbers landscape
because first he had to create
canvas, colors, paints, and numbers.
He created algebra later, to punish us
for biting that goddam apple.